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2025-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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How can workshops contribute to overall company culture? I don\'t know. maybe, I think workshop have cooperative attitude, improvement points and dining together. I know workshop not important for our. because not arrange special work. I would rather work.

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[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

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-Teacher Ash

I don\'t know.

>> CORRECT!

maybe, I think workshop have cooperative attitude, improvement points and dining together.

>> Maybe doing workshops help the team to develop teamwork, improve weaknesses while dining together.

I know workshop not important for our. because not arrange special work.

>> All I know is that it is not important for our company\'s goals because it is not work.

I would rather work.

>> I would rather work than attend workshops.

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