Homework
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How does working in a corporate IT setting influence career development, especially with the need to continuously learn new technologies and adapt to [이름]ing roles?
Experience is very important in the IT industry. because IT is constantly [이름]ing for technology.
I recommend someone want to work in the IT industry. They are constantly develop, not boarding and will be proud.
and important is more salary. I am good. sometimes I regret for IT . However, I appropriate for IT guy.
I sometimes work other field in the IT industry. For example, I experience for development, server engineer and security engineer.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
See you tomorrow!
-Teacher Ash
>> CORRECT!
because IT is constantly [이름]ing for technology.
>> It is because IT is constantly [이름]ing.
I recommend someone want to work in the IT industry. They are constantly develop, not boarding and will be proud.
>> I suggest that if someone wants to work in the IT industry, they should constantly improve themselves by learning new things.
and important is more salary.
>> One should also consider the salary.
I am good. sometimes I regret for IT .
>> I am happy with my salary, but sometimes I regret it.
However, I appropriate for IT guy.
>> However, IT suits me well.
I sometimes work other field in the IT industry.
>> I have also experience working in different field.
For example, I experience for development, server engineer and security engineer.
>> Before, I worked as a server engineer and a security engineer; I also worked in the development department.
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