Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?
I live in Daegu, Korea.
There is no beach my hometown.
So, sometimes I think I want to live in Namhae.
There is most beautiful beach one of Namhae, Korea.
Somedays If I retire from work I would live in Namhae.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for sharing! Please review the corrections. Remember that clear sentence structure and correct word choice make your ideas easier to follow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. I live in Daegu, Korea.
> CORRECT.
2. There is no beach my hometown.
> There is no beach in my hometown.
3. So, sometimes I think I want to live in Namhae.
> CORRECT.
4. There is most beautiful beach one of Namhae, Korea.
> One of the most beautiful beaches in Korea is in Namhae.
5. Somedays If I retire from work I would live in Namhae.
> Someday, if I retire from work, I would live in Namhae.
6. Thank you.
> CORRECT.
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