homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think kids should play video games? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think kids should play video games. Because video games can develop function of brain. So video game isn\'t just a bad thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. You can already form short sentences and use basic grammar correctly. Sometimes you forget word order or small words, but this is normal at your level. With more practice, these mistakes will become less common. So keep it up! ~Teacher Jane ^_^
I think kids should play video games. Because video games can develop function of brain.
>> I think kids should play video games because video games can develop brain function.
So video game isn\'t just a bad thing.
>> So video games aren\'t just a bad thing.
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