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If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?
Theseday I intersted in the Cebu city.
Becuase There is beautiful city and many kindly people.
and I want to lean English more.
So, If I have a chance I want live there one months during my vacation.
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Thank you~ T. Camille.
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. CamilleTheseday I intersted in the Cebu city.
>> These days, I am interested in living in Cebu city.
Becuase There is beautiful city and many kindly people.
>> That\'s because it\'s a beautiful city, and there are many kind people.
and I want to lean English more.
>> I also want to learn and improve my English skills.
So, If I have a chance I want live there one months during my vacation.
>> So, If I have a chance, I want live there for one month on my vacation.
OR >> So, If I have a chance, I want live there for a month on my vacation.
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