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학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you so much for teaching me.
If I have good English skill, I need to talking, writing, litening with foreigner.
Talking is really imfortant to speak somothly about my things.
And if I write English everyday, I can check the my English sentence.
And it’s not necessary althought I can write English well, I don’t litening to English,
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]. I hope you\'re having a good day. Your writing is becoming clearer and organized. Simple transitions make your ideas easy to follow. However, sometimes you forget word order or small words, but with more practice, these mistakes will become less common. Overall, you’re building a strong foundation. Keep it up. You’re moving in the right direction. Talk to you in class. ~Jane c\",)
Thank you so much for teaching me.
>> CORRECT
If I have good English skill, I need to talking, writing, litening with foreigner.
>> If I have good English skills, I will be able to communicate well with foreigners.
Talking is really imfortant to speak somothly about my things.
>> Talking is really important for speaking smoothly about everything.
And if I write English everyday, I can check the my English sentence.
>> And if I write English every day, I can check my English sentences.
And it’s not necessary althought I can write English well, I don’t litening to English,
>> Although it\'s not necessary, I can write in English well even if I don\'t listen to English.
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