Homework
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What extra responsibilities do city governments have during winter (e.g., snow removal)?
What preparation do you do whenever winter comes?
I don\'t know. city governments employee are stanby snow in office.
They rush to work when it snows. so government employee is hard.
I am well know it. because my father job was government employee.
I ready to make a Christmas tree came winter. I like winter.
There is warm in the cold weather.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
They rush to work when it snows.
I ready to make a Christmas tree came winter.
There is warm in the cold weather.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this.
-Teacher Ash
I don\'t know.
>>CORRECT!
city governments employee are stanby snow in office.
>> City government employees are on standby whenever it snows.
They rush to work when it snows.
>>CORRECT!
so government employee is hard.
>> Being a government employee is hard.
I am well know it. because my father job was government employee.
>> I know this very well because my father was one.
I ready to make a Christmas tree came winter.
>> I am ready to buy a Christmas tree this winter.
I like winter.
>> CORRECT!
There is warm in the cold weather.
>> I think there is warmth in cold weather.
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