homework

2012-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Your teacher gives too much homework. >> Does your teacher give too much homework? 1. Grandparents love their grandchildren. Do Grandparents love their grandchildren? 2. The bathroom has a bathtub. Has the bathroom a bathtub? 3. He cooked the rice too long. did he cook the rice too long? 4. It makes me very uncomfortable. Does it make me very uncomfortable? 5. Marie runs two miles every day. Does Marie run two miles every day? and I try to express but cannot express about competition in class the competition I told is inportant to life as architect and most fomous competition in architecture of kerea. Most students of architecture in korea submit their final projects before graduation to this competition Winner is given 5000 dollars. Actually The winner gain the highest honors than money and educational background.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I understand that expressing can sometimes be difficult. However, I am positive that you can do it. Just believe in yourself and be determined to do what you want to do. Don\'t ever give up on your dreams. T. Jane Here are my corrections for you: Your teacher gives too much homework.>> Does your teacher give too much homework?1. Grandparents love their grandchildren.Do Grandparents love their grandchildren?>>Correct2. The bathroom has a bathtub.Has the bathroom a bathtub?>>Does the bathroom have a bathtub?3. He cooked the rice too long.did he cook the rice too long?>>Correct4. It makes me very uncomfortable.Does it make me very uncomfortable?>> Did he cook the rice too long?5. Marie runs two miles every day.Does Marie run two miles every day?>>CorrectandI try to express but cannot express about competition in class the competition I told is inportant to life as architectand most fomous competition in architecture of kerea. >>I tried to explain in class about the competition I joined in, but I couldn\'t express it. It is important to the life of an architect and it is the most famous architecture competition in Korea.Most students of architecture in korea submit their final projects before graduation to this competition >>Most architecture students in Korea submit their projects to this competition before graduation.Winner is given 5000 dollars. >>The winner is given 5000 dollars.Actually The winner gain the highest honors than money and educational background. >>Gaining the highest honors in educational background is more important than the monetary reward.  

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