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What do you think is the best city in your country?
I think the best city is seoul in korea.
but, the apartment is very expensive in seoul.
and many people live in there. There is too loud and complex city.
Anyway, I am currently living in Daegu.
This is more quite than seoul and inexpensive house.
I like my city.
Thank you.
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What do you think is the best city in your country?
I think the best city is seoul in korea.
I think the best city is seoul in korea.
>> I think the best city in Korea is Seoul.
but, the apartment is very expensive in seoul.
>> But, the apartment is very expensive in Seoul.
OR >> But, apartments in Seoul are pricey.
and many people live in there. There is too loud and complex city.
>> Aside from that, there are many people living in there. It\'s too loud and complex.
Anyway, I am currently living in Daegu.
>> CORRECT!
This is more quite than seoul and inexpensive house.
>> This is more quiet than Seoul, and houses are affordable.
I like my city.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you.
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