homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think strict teachers are good for student learning? Why? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: It is good. But sometimes good. Because students are scared of strict teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. You can form short, clear sentences. You sometimes forget small words or mix up word order, but as you practice more, these mistakes will happen less often. Keep it up. Have a great weekend! ~Teacher Jane ^_^
It is good. But sometimes good. Because students are scared of strict teacher.
>> It is good, but sometimes it\'s not because students are scared of strict teachers.
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