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2025-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Have you ever experienced dialing a wrong number? When I was child, there is no smart phone. There is only telephone one each house. So, I called wrong number sometimes. Although, inconvience use telephone. but, I miss that time. Enjoy your weekend. Thank you. T. Camille.

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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Just always do your best. :)
~ T. Camille

Have you ever experienced dialing a wrong number?

When I was child, there is no smart phone.

>> When I was a child, there was no smart phone.

OR >> There were no smart phones when I was a child.

There is only telephone one each house.

>> There were only telephones in each house.

So, I called wrong number sometimes.

>> So, I called wrong numbers sometimes.

Although, inconvience use telephone. but, I miss that time.

>> Although it\'s inconvenient to use telephones, I miss that time.

Enjoy your weekend. Thank you. T. Camille.

(Thank you Sir [이름] ~ have a good weekend, too!)

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