Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Because on the phone, We can’t see face or body language, so voice and pronunciation are more important.
1. There is nothing to throw away among the items I have.
2. Dinner time is the best time, because I can meet and talk with family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Great job sharing your ideas! I like that you explained why phone conversations rely on voice and pronunciation. It shows good thinking. Your sentences about your items and dinner time are clear and relatable. Next time, try adding a little extra detail, like an example of your favorite item or a special dinner conversation, to make your writing even more interesting. Keep it up!
~Teacher Polly
>>When talking on the phone, we can’t see each other’s faces or body language, so voice and pronunciation are more important.
There is nothing to throw away among the items I have.
>>There is nothing I want to throw away among the items I have.
Dinner time is the best time, because I can meet and talk with family.
>>Dinner time is the best time because I can meet and talk with my family.
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