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2025-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hello, have a good Monday. - My wife is really introvert - I usually like innovative work. So I always looking for a lot of work - when I was young, I have to competitive with a lot of people.

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Hi there, [이름]. Happy Monday to you, too. I hope you\'re having a good start to the week. Let\'s talk later in class. ~Jane ^__^

1. My wife is really introvert
>> My wife is a real introvert. 

2. I usually like innovative work. So I always looking for a lot of work
>> I usually like innovative work so I always look for a lot of work. 

3. when I was young, I have to competitive with a lot of people.
>> When I was young, I had to be competitive with a lot of people. 

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