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2025-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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How does the ending set up future films in the Avatar series? What do you think is going to happen in Avatar: Fire and Ash? I have confidence to get important message for our. I think it\'s wrong for humans to destroy nature. It\'s like to get a lesson. Reality. I expected the film in Avatar:Fire and Ash. tribe vs Fire trive and Human. maybe Origin tribe will win. so They will reject human aggression. This Avatar film is amazing the CG effect. and Their abilities are great.

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[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

-Teacher Ash

I have confidence to get important message for our.

>> I\'m confident about the ending of the series.

I think it\'s wrong for humans to destroy nature.

>> I think the message is for human to stop destroying environment.

It\'s like to get a lesson. Reality.

>>The message also applies in real life.

I expected the film in Avatar:Fire and Ash. tribe vs Fire trive and Human.

>>I expect this message in Avatar: Fire and Ash and Tribe vs Human.

maybe Origin tribe will win. so They will reject human aggression.

>> Maybe the real Avatar will win and fights human aggression.

This Avatar film is amazing the CG effect.

>> This Avatar film has an Amazing CGI effect.

and Their abilities are great.

>> The filmmakers did really well.

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