Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. blood
Before I fell down on the road, I hurt knee, lost a little blood. I almost cried by pain.
2. distributed
Some restaurant and company distribute food by free. This distributed food give for poor people.
3. agenda
These days most important my life of agenda is healthy. I want to live healthily during my time.
강사 첨삭
Hello Eva!!
Thanks for answering you homework. You did well. Keep it up!
Have a great day ahead and I\'ll talk to you in our next class.
Always take care of yourself, you have been working hard this past few days and you need to eat healthy food.
Have a nice sleep!!!
T. Jeny
Before I fell down on the road, I hurt knee, lost a little blood. I almost cried by pain.
>>Before I fell down on the road, I hurt my knee and lost a little blood. I almost cried from the pain.
2. distributed
Some restaurant and company distribute food by free. This distributed food give for poor people.
2. distributed
Some restaurant and company distribute food by free. This distributed food give for poor people.
>>Some restaurants and companies distribute food for free. This distributed food is given to poor people.
3. agenda
These days most important my life of agenda is healthy. I want to live healthily during my time.
3. agenda
These days most important my life of agenda is healthy. I want to live healthily during my time.
>>These days, the most important thing on my agenda is my health. I want to live healthily during my time.
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