Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher:D have a good day
Do you want to know about my home? Well..l live in apartment with my wife. And there are two room. So I think it is really small. But it’s very cozy and comfortable for me. So I’m usually at home on weekend with my wife. Anyway it’s small apartment so, I will move another home someday
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]. I hope Tuesday is going well for you. Thank you for sharing about your lovely home. Since it will be part of our lesson later, we\'ll discuss it more in class. I\'ll talk to you then. ~Jane ^_^
Do you want to know about my home?
>> CORRECT
Well..l live in apartment with my wife.
>> Well, I live in an apartment with my wife.
And there are two room. So I think it is really small. But it’s very cozy and comfortable for me.
>> There are two rooms, so I think it is really small, but it\'s very cozy and comfortable for me.
So I’m usually at home on weekend with my wife.
>> I\'m usually at home on weekends with my wife.
Anyway it’s small apartment so, I will move another home someday
>> Anyway, it\'s a small apartment, but I will move to a bigger one someday.
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