homework
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Question: Can you share a small mistake you made and what you learned from it? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I can share a small mistake. Because we learn through my mistake or other\'s mistake. It\'s good to share my mistakes than passing my mistake.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. Thank you for checking out the homework topic and sharing your thoughts. You can recognize common words and write short, simple sentences. Grammar is developing, and mistakes are a normal part of learning at this stage. To continue improving, practice basic vocabulary, simple sentence patterns. Keep it up! ~Teacher Jane c\",
I can share a small mistake.
>> CORRECT
Because we learn through my mistake or other\'s mistake.
>> We learn through our mistakes or through other people\'s mistakes.
It\'s good to share my mistakes than passing my mistake.
>> It\'s good to share what we learned from our mistakes rather than ignoring them.
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