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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Cathy!
When I met someone for the first time I don\'t judge their appearance. That is not a good way.
I am more interested in a person’s attitude and how thoughtful person. I can learn that through conversation.
I’m more generous toward pretty women. Above all, I like honest people. No matter how pretty a woman is, I don’t like people who lie.
강사 첨삭
Hi Clark,
I really like how honest and direct this message is. You’re clear about your values, and that shows confidence and self-awareness. Focusing on attitude, thoughtfulness, and honesty is very strong, those are qualities that matter in real relationships, not just first impressions.
~Teacher Cathy
Whenever I met someone for the first time I don\'t judge their appearance. That is not a good way.
>>Whenever I meet someone for the first time, I don\'t judge their appearance. That is not a good thing to do.
I am more interested in a person’s attitude and how thoughtful person. I can learn that through conversation.
>>I am more interested in a person’s attitude and how thoughtful they are. I can learn that through conversation.
I’m more generous toward pretty women. Above all, I like honest people. No matter how pretty a woman is, I don’t like people who lie.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I tend to be more generous toward women who are attractive, but above all, I value honesty. No matter how beautiful someone is, I can\'t stand people who are dishonest.
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