homework
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Question: Can you think of a simple example of someone who wants too much attention? What happens? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: Example someone who wants too much attention, she or he will strange thing do to wants attention. And she or he is will have active personality. In this my classroom, Some student wants too much attention in my classroom.
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Example someone who wants too much attention, she or he will strange thing do to wants attention.
>> For example, someone who wants too much attention, he or she will do strange things to get attention.
And she or he is will have active personality.
>> And she or he will have an active personality.
In this my classroom, Some student wants too much attention in my classroom.
>> In my class, some students want too much attention.
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