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2025-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I made an advertisement hopefully to many people distributed. The blood is deep more than water. ( do you know this sentense mean?) can we move to the next to agenda? Hi, jeny It\'s friday again too fast I want to times free haha how about you? Have a nice weekend :)

강사 첨삭

Hello Jon!!!

I encourage you to to assess yourself and set up your goals, these goals are ownership or your learnings. So start setting up your goals if life and especially in setting up your goals in learning English these are your treasures. I can see you your potentials in speaking keep it up.!!!!
T. Jeny


I made an advertisement hopefully to many people distributed.
>>I made an advertisement and hopefully many people will share it.
The blood is deep more than water. ( do you know this sentense mean?)
>>Blood is thicker than water. 
( Do you know this sentence mean?)
can we move to the next to agenda?
>>
Can we move to the next agenda item?
Hi, jeny
>>correct
It\'s friday again too fast
>>It\'s Friday again. Time is too fast.
I want to times free haha
>>I want to have free time. haha
how about you?
>>correct
Have a nice weekend :)
>>correct

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