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Can hiking be dangerous?
If you wrong go hiking course, you will be dangerous.
So, I think the hiking don\'t go alone.
But, most of mountains in korea very safe.
The hiking course is good maintain.
If you travel in korea I recommand hiking experience. ^^..
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If you wrong go hiking course, you will be dangerous.
>> If you go to a wrong hiking trail, it will be dangerous.
So, I think the hiking don\'t go alone.
>> So I think you should not go hiking alone.
But, most of mountains in korea very safe.
>> But, most mountains in Korea are very safe.
The hiking course is good maintain.
>> The hiking course is well-maintained.
If you travel in korea I recommand hiking experience. ^^.
>> If you travel to Korea, I recommend you to experience hiking. ^^.
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