homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In ball games, why is effort sometimes more important than the final score?
How do ball games teach people how to handle winning and losing?
I think it is important the final score. only final score show what the game is about.
All player effort for win. Directors increasing fighting spirit for player. and give encouragement.
I like play football and watch football. I observe the player face. I can see how confident the players.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about your favorite sport.
-Teacher Ash
>> I think the final score is the more important.
only final score show what the game is about.
>> Only the final score shows the team\'s deter[이름]ation.
All player effort for win.
>> All athletes put all their effort to win.
Directors increasing fighting spirit for player. and give encouragement.
>> The coaches support and encourage their players.
I like play football and watch football.
>> I like to play and watch football.
I observe the player face.
>> I observe each player\'s face.
I can see how confident the players.
>> I can see how confident they are.
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