homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Why is it better to help someone now instead of later? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: It\'s important to help someone right now. Because we can\'t expect what will happen. So it\'s better to help someone as soon as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. Your writing is developing, even with some grammatical mistakes, but you\'re on the right track, and keep it up! You\'re doing great. ~Teacher Jane ^^
It\'s important to help someone right now. Because we can\'t expect what will happen.
>> OR: It\'s important to help someone right away because we don\'t know what will happen later on.
So it\'s better to help someone as soon as possible.
>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.