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why do you think people drink alcohol?
I think most of people likes to drink alcohol.
Becuase, They like to tipsy night with their friends.
But, These day they are changing.
They plefer to drink coffee with friends.
I like coffee too than to drink alcohol.
Thank you T. Camille. Marry christmas~~
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you T. Camille. Merry Christmas~~
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
why do you think people drink alcohol?
I think most of people likes to drink alcohol.
I think most of people likes to drink alcohol.
>> I think most people like drinking alcohol.
Becuase, They like to tipsy night with their friends.
>> It\'s because they want to get tipsy with their friends.
But, These day they are changing.
>> But these days, they are changing.
They plefer to drink coffee with friends.
>> They prefer to drink coffee with their friends.
I like coffee too than to drink alcohol.
>> I prefer coffee to alcohol.
OR >> Drinking coffee is much better than drinking alcohol.
Thank you T. Camille. Merry Christmas~~
(Merry Christmas to you too, Sir [이름]! ^^ ~ T. Camille)
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