homework
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Do you think company events during Christmas are necessary? Why or why not?
How can companies make Christmas events or year -end celebration more inclusive and enjoyable for everyone?
I am not need to celebrate for Christmas in Company. I think it is important to spent time with my family for Christmas.
I think Companies need to be more [이름]ing for worker. more benefit more rest for employee.
but can\'t it. because company don\'t want to make employee loose their dignity.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your ideas here.
See you later!
-Teacher Ash
>> I don\'t need to celebrate Christmas in the company.
I think it is important to spent time with my family for Christmas.
>> I think it is more important to celebrate it with my family.
I think Companies need to be more [이름]ing for worker. more benefit more rest for employee.
>> I think companies need to give more benefits and vacation leaves to their employees.
but can\'t it. because company don\'t want to make employee loose their dignity.
>> However, it is not possible because they don\'t want employees to become lazy.
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