Homework

Annyeong [이름]! How was your day? It was raining in my city T__T. Anyway, thanks for sending your composition. If you have any questions please just ask away ^^. I will try to help you as much as I can my dear. Other than that, yes, it\'s good to know that you are thankful to your dad. You should say [Thank you and I love you] to your dad later (= kkkk. Talk to you tonight! Take care my dear!! Hugs and kisses.

~t.Karen (.-__-)

I would like to say [Thank you] to my daddy. Because, my daddy takes me to school, everyday.

>> Correct answer:  I would like to say [Thank you] to my daddy because my daddy takes me to school, everyday.

>> ** Remove the comma [ , ] after the conjunction [BECAUSE]. 

>> ** Do not start your sentence with the conjunction [BECAUSE] without a 1[CAUSE] and an 2[EFFECT] present, so combine your sentences. 

>> ** When you use the conjunction [BECAUSE] you need to have a [CAUSE = reason for something to happen] and an [EFFECT = the consequence] in your sentence.  

>> ** In your sentence,  (I would like to say [Thank you] to my daddy) is your Effect and

(because my daddy takes me to school, everyday.) is your Cause. 

>>  I would like to say \"Thank you\" to my daddy. Because, my daddy takes me to school, everyday.

>> Example of a CORRECT sentence: I am happy because I won. ---- [I am happy] is your Effect and [I won] is the Cause. 

>> Example of an INcorrect sentence:  I am happy.   Because I won.