homework
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Do you feel nervous or anxious before a health check-up? What do you do to feel more comfortable?
Do you think people focus enough on preventative care, or do they tend to only visit doctors when something goes wrong?
I always fell nervous when a health check-up. I have high blood pressure and Obesity. so when I have a health check-up, I always exercise having a time. then I have better check-up result.
yes , almost people feel wrong something, they used to go to the hospital. if we don\'t get sick, we don\'t go to the hospital.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
I fully agree with you.
I would also go to the doctor only when I\'m sick.
-Teacher Ash
I always fell nervous when a health check-up.
>> I\'m always nervous when I go for a check-up.
I have high blood pressure and Obesity.
>> I suffer from high blood pressure and obesity.
so when I have a health check-up, I always exercise having a time. then I have better check-up result.
>> So, I always exercise before my regular check-up to make sure I have better result.
yes , almost people feel wrong something, they used to go to the hospital.
>> Yes, almost all people I know only go to the hospital when they feel sick.
if we don\'t get sick, we don\'t go to the hospital.
>> They don\'t go to the hospital when they are not sick.
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