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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Cathy~
When I saw the your question I thought about this past year for a moment. Now that I think about it, there was nothing special, but
I don\'t kown why it felt so hard at the time. Does that mean I\'ve grown a lot?
Maybe the besting I did this year, I decided to study English agian and I doing that.
I am not able to understand for our class clearly, I am looking forward to meet you. Sometimes you makes me happy and give the courage
when I felt hard. You are so thoughful person. I hope the rest of this year goes well, and nexy year brings many good things for both of us.
Thank you always for your effort in sincerely. Happy new year!
강사 첨삭
Hi Clark,
Reading your message, I can really feel how honest and reflective you are. When things felt hard at the time but don’t seem so big now, that usually does mean you’ve grown. Growth often happens quietly, without us noticing it right away.
Thank you for your kind words. I’m really glad our classes give you some happiness and courage when things feel heavy. That means a lot to me. You are also a very thoughtful person, and your sincerity comes through clearly in your writing.
I hope the rest of this year ends gently for you, and that next year brings health, peace, and many good moments for you and your family. Keep believing in yourself, you’re moving forward. Effort and consistency always win in the end.
Happy New Year, Clark
~Teacher Cathy
When I saw the your question I thought about this past year for a moment.
>>When I saw your question, I thought about this past year for a moment.
Now that I think about it, there was nothing special, but I don\'t know why it felt so hard at the time. Does that mean I\'ve grown a lot?
>>CORRECT
OR>>When I look back, nothing stands out, but it somehow felt very hard at the time. Does that mean I’ve grown a lot?
Maybe the besting I did this year, I decided to study English again and I doing that.
>>Maybe the best thing I did this year was deciding to study English again, and I am doing that.
I am not able to understand for our class clearly, I am looking forward to meet you.
>>I am not able to understand our class clearly yet, but I am looking forward to meeting you.
Sometimes you makes me happy and give the courage when I felt hard.
>>Sometimes you make me happy and give me courage when I feel things are hard.
You are so thoughtful person.
>>You are such a thoughtful person.
I hope the rest of this year goes well, and next year brings many good things for both of us.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I hope the rest of this year goes well, and that next year brings many good things for both of us.
Thank you always for your effort in sincerely. Happy new year!
>>Thank you always for your sincere effort. Happy New Year!
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