homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) Tom does not collect stamps. (not/to collect)
2) You do not sing songs in the bathroom. (not/to sing)
3) Julie does not work in the garden. (not/to work)
4) I do not sit at home. (not/to sit)
5) Tina and Kate do not open the windows. (not/to open)
My flute class had a meeting for our teacher yesterday.
Yesterday's class was last.
She quitted for getting her baby.
After our class, we went to the restaurant that I booked.
We ordered some Bossam.
Bossame is boiled port wrapped in cabbage leaves with seasing and vegetables.
It's really delicious.
I was on a diet but I couldn't endure to eat.
I ate it very much. I was totally full.
So I walked to burn off that calories.
When I was on my home, you called me.
I took your call without preparing. Sorry~
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
How are you today?
Oh, you don\'t need to say sorry my dear coz I totally understand you..:)
I\'ll talk to you again later Miss. [Name] and take care always..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) Tom does not collect stamps. (not/to collect)
>>correct2) You do not sing songs in the bathroom. (not/to sing)
>>correct3) Julie does not work in the garden. (not/to work)
>>correct4) I do not sit at home. (not/to sit)
>>correct5) Tina and Kate do not open the windows. (not/to open)
>>correctMy flute class had a meeting for our teacher yesterday.
>>correctYesterday\'s class was last.>>correct
She quitted for getting her baby.
>>She quit for her baby..though we can also use the word quitted in informal conversations.After our class, we went to the restaurant that I booked.
>>correctWe ordered some Bossam.
>>correctBossame is boiled port wrapped in cabbage leaves with seasing and vegetables.
>>Bossam is a bolied pork wrapped in cabbage with some seasonings and some vegetables.It\'s really delicious.
>>correctI was on a diet but I couldn\'t endure to eat.
>>correct
>>I\'m on a diet but I couldn\'t help but eat.I ate it very much. I was totally full.
>>correctSo I walked to burn off that calories.
>>correctWhen I was on my home, you called me.
>>When I was on my way home you called me.I took your call without preparing. Sorry~
>>correct
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