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2012-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Tom does not collect stamps. (not/to collect) 2) You do not sing songs in the bathroom. (not/to sing) 3) Julie does not work in the garden. (not/to work) 4) I do not sit at home. (not/to sit) 5) Tina and Kate do not open the windows. (not/to open) My flute class had a meeting for our teacher yesterday. Yesterday's class was last. She quitted for getting her baby. After our class, we went to the restaurant that I booked. We ordered some Bossam. Bossame is boiled port wrapped in cabbage leaves with seasing and vegetables. It's really delicious. I was on a diet but I couldn't endure to eat. I ate it very much. I was totally full. So I walked to burn off that calories. When I was on my home, you called me. I took your call without preparing. Sorry~

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], How are you today? Oh, you don\'t need to say sorry my dear coz I totally understand you..:) I\'ll talk to you again later Miss. [Name] and take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 1) Tom does not collect stamps. (not/to collect) >>correct2) You do not sing songs in the bathroom. (not/to sing) >>correct3) Julie does not work in the garden. (not/to work) >>correct4) I do not sit at home. (not/to sit) >>correct5) Tina and Kate do not open the windows. (not/to open) >>correctMy flute class had a meeting for our teacher yesterday. >>correctYesterday\'s class was last.>>correct She quitted for getting her baby. >>She quit for her baby..though we can also use the word quitted in informal conversations.After our class, we went to the restaurant that I booked. >>correctWe ordered some Bossam. >>correctBossame is boiled port wrapped in cabbage leaves with seasing and vegetables. >>Bossam is a bolied pork wrapped in cabbage with some seasonings and some vegetables.It\'s really delicious. >>correctI was on a diet but I couldn\'t endure to eat. >>correct >>I\'m on a diet but I couldn\'t help but eat.I ate it very much. I was totally full. >>correctSo I walked to burn off that calories. >>correctWhen I was on my home, you called me. >>When I was on my way home you called me.I took your call without preparing. Sorry~ >>correct

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