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What career goals do you have this year?
This year my career goals attend English meeting
and If I speak some my opinions.
I don\'t speak any words in English meeting yet.
Because I was nervous and I scarread.
But, I feel get confidence.
Because I will study English with you and Power English.
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. ^^ [ Happy weekend, Sir [이름]! ^^ ]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
What career goals do you have this year?
This year my career goals attend English meeting
and If I speak some my opinions.
This year my career goals attend English meeting
and If I speak some my opinions.
>> This year, one of my career goals is to attend English meetings and use English in expressing my opinions.
I don\'t speak any words in English meeting yet.
>> I don\'t say anything in English meetings yet.
Because I was nervous and I scarread.
>> It\'s because I feel nervous and scared.
But, I feel get confidence.
>> But now, I feel more confident.
OR >> But now, I have gained confidence.
Because I will study English with you and Power English.
>> It\'s because I will continue studying English with you and Power English.
Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. ^^ [ Happy weekend, Sir [이름]! ^^ ]
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