Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework:
What are some superstitious beliefs that people do during the Lunar New Year for good luck?
Do you think New Year’s traditions help people feel hopeful? Why or why not?
Yes, In the korea case, we make a wish to see during raise sun for Jan 1.
A lot of people move the east. Because, The sun rises in the east.
At that time, people praying.
I don\'t believe traditional god. I think people need peace of [이름]ds. so believe traditional god.
I don\' want to get traditional helper.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
At that time, people praying.
I don\'t believe traditional god.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Teacher Ash
Yes, In the korea case, we make a wish to see during raise sun for Jan 1.
>> Yes, in Korea, we climb a mountain and make a wish facing the sunrise on Jan 1.
A lot of people move the east.Because, The sun rises in the east.
>> A lot of people travel to the east because the sunrises in the east.
At that time, people praying.
>> As they face the sun, they pray.
I don\'t believe traditional god.
>> I don\'t believe in a traditional god.
I think people need peace of [이름]ds.
>> I think people need peace of [이름]d.
so believe traditional god.
>> So, they believe in a traditional god.
I don\' want to get traditional helper.
>> I don\'t need help from such gods.
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