homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do young girls nowadays care about beauty? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think it is yes. Because my classmate did make up and go to her\'s school, But I don\'t have interested about make up.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. Good job on your homework. Your writing shows improvement, with more complete sentences and basic organization, though accuracy and variety of vocabulary can continue to develop. I hope you\'re having a good day. See you in our next class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I think it is yes.
>> I think young girls nowadays care about beauty.
Because my classmate did make up and go to her\'s school,
>> My classmate puts on makeup before going to school.
But I don\'t have interested about make up.
>> But I don\'t have any interest in makeup.
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