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Do you feel comfortable introducing yourself to random people?
No, I don\'t like introducing to random people.
Because, I\'m shy person. Sometimes other people introduce myself about only work.
But, I think it would be good will chance variers experience
when many random people meet.
Thank you. ^-^
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. ^-^ [ You\'re welcome, Sir [이름]! ^^ T. Camille ]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. CamilleDo you feel comfortable introducing yourself to random people?
No, I don\'t like introducing to random people.
No, I don\'t like introducing to random people.
>> No, I don\'t like introducing myself to random people.
Because, I\'m shy person.
>> Because, I\'m a shy person.
OR >> It\'s because I easily feel shy.
Sometimes other people introduce myself about only work.
>> Sometimes other people introduce me to other people, but only about work.
But, I think it would be good will chance variers experience
when many random people meet.
when many random people meet.
>> But, I think it would be a good chance to experience various things when many random people meet.
Thank you. ^-^ [ You\'re welcome, Sir [이름]! ^^ T. Camille ]
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