homework
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What types of early education cost the most in Korea (kindergarten, daycare, private academies)?
Why do parents spend money on private English, math, or arts classes for young children? Are these extra classes necessary at a young age?
I think we spend money for private academy.
they are weep money. of course only famous teacher. I\'m also going to make a reservation to academy for my son in the future.
All parents want their children to study well. so parents taking children to the academy. I don\' think extra class necessary for children.
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[이름] [이름],
they are weep money.
All parents want their children to study well.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Teacher Ash
I think we spend money for private academy.
>> I think Koreans spend more money for private academies.
they are weep money.
>> These academies can bleed us dry.
of course only famous teacher.
>> We also have to choose a famous teacher for our children.
I\'m also going to make a reservation to academy for my son in the future.
>> In the future, I am also going to make reservation for my son\'s private academy classes.
All parents want their children to study well.
>>CORRECT!
so parents taking children to the academy.
>>So, parents send their children to attend academy classes.
I don\' think extra class necessary for children.
>> I don\'t think that these extra classes are necessary at a young age though.
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