Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My favoraite writter is RachelRenee Russell
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for s[이름]g! She is well-known for writing the Dork Diaries series, which is popular among young readers because of its humor and relatable school-life stories.
Next time, try adding WHY she is your favorite writer. For example: “My favorite writer is Rachel Renee Russell because her books are funny and inspiring.” This will make your writing more detailed and expressive.
Please review the corrections. Remember that clear sentence structure and correct word choice make your ideas easier to follow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. My favoraite writter is RachelRenee Russell
-- My favorite writer is Rachel Renee Russell.
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