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How do you describe your hometown?
My hometown is one of big city in Korea.
There are mountain around city. And Especally sommer is too hot.
But I think my hometown is beautiful city in night.
There are too many delicious foods.
If you chance I recommand to visit in my hometown.
Enjoy your weekend. Thank you teacher~*
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Enjoy your weekend. Thank you teacher~*
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How do you describe your hometown?
My hometown is one of big city in Korea.
My hometown is one of big city in Korea.
>> My hometown is one of the big cities in Korea.
There are mountain around city.
>> There are mountains around the city.
And Especally sommer is too hot.
>> It\'s really hot especially during the summer season.
But I think my hometown is beautiful city in night.
>> But I think my hometown is a beautiful city, most especially at night.
There are too many delicious foods.
>> CORRECT!
If you chance I recommand to visit in my hometown.>> If there\'s a chance, I recommend you to visit my hometown.
Enjoy your weekend. Thank you teacher~*
[ Happy weekend Sir [이름]! ]
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