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How important are speed, convenience, and customer service in Korean retail?
How do Korean retail companies use data and technology to gain a competitive advantage?
It is important we can service for customer. Korean are very sensitively.
if I provide something slowly speed, convenience and etc , customer is very angry and raise VoC (Voice of customer)
I don\'t know that the field. Maybe They are using for big data. and Businesses are a lot of challenge.
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>> The most important thing is to serve the customer excellently.
Korean are very sensitively.
>>Koreans are very sensitive.
if I provide something slowly speed, convenience and etc , customer is very angry and raise VoC (Voice of customer)
>> Delivering poor service will inevitably upset the customers, leading to bad reviews that will surely impact the business.
I don\'t know that the field.
>>CORRECT!
Maybe They are using for big data.
>> Maybe they are using it for big data.
and Businesses are a lot of challenge.
>> Owning a business is a lot of challenge.
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