Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The value of the collection may increase over time
2. Collecting and hoarding are similar because both keep things.
Collecting is a hobby, but hoarding is bad because people keep things they do not need.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Great job explaining the difference between collecting and hoarding! I like how you clearly showed that one is positive and the other can be harmful. Next time, you could give an example of a collection you like to make your explanation even more personal. Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Polly
The value of the collection may increase over time
>>CORRECT
Collecting and hoarding are similar because both keep things.
>>Collecting and hoarding are similar because both involve keeping things.
Collecting is a hobby, but hoarding is bad because people keep things they do not need.
>>Collecting is a hobby, but hoarding is negative because people keep things they do not need.
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