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What are the disadvantages of traveling alone?
To be honest, I like of traveling alone than with family.
Because, I want to free time alone.
So, sometimes my wife told me If you want to go travel alone you can go travel.
But, When I travel alone I feel too loney and dangerous.
Thank you. ^^ Good night.
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Thank you. ^^ Good night.
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What are the disadvantages of traveling alone?
To be honest, I like of traveling alone than with family.
To be honest, I like of traveling alone than with family.
>> To be honest, I like traveling alone more than with family.
Because, I want to free time alone.
>> Because, I want to have some time alone.
OR >> It\'s because I want to have my own free time.
So, sometimes my wife told me If you want to go travel alone you can go travel.
>> So, sometimes my wife tells me if you want to go travel alone you can go travel.
But, When I travel alone I feel too loney and dangerous.
>> But when I travel alone, I feel too lonely and it\'s dangerous.
Thank you. ^^ Good night.
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