Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
i want to write a scarystories becouse i like spooky and scary things
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for s[이름]g! Writing about things you enjoy will make your English practice more fun and meaningful. Next time, try adding a short detail about \'what kind of scary story\' you’d like to write; for example, about ghosts, haunted houses, or mysterious creatures. This will make your writing more vivid and help you practice using descriptive words.
Please review the corrections. Remember that clear sentence structure and correct word choice make your ideas easier to follow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. i want to write a scarystories becouse i like spooky and scary things
-- I want to write scary stories because I like spooky and scary things.
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