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What do you like best about your city?
I think my city is quite than seoul.
The road is wide, so there is not rush hour.
And There are many new apartment.
Near by There are many park too.
But, Young people only want to live in Seoul. so, I\'m sad.
Thank you. ^^
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Thank you. ^^
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
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What do you like best about your city?
I think my city is quite than seoul.
I think my city is quite than seoul.
>> I think my city is more quiet than Seoul.
The road is wide, so there is not rush hour.
>> The road is wide, so there is no rush hour.
OR >> There are no rush hours because roads are wide.
And There are many new apartment.
>> Also, there many new apartments.
Near by There are many park too.
>> There are many parks nearby, too.
But, Young people only want to live in Seoul. so, I\'m sad.
>> But, young people only want to live in Seoul.
So, I\'m sad.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you. ^^
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