homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating fast food? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: The advantage is My feeling so better. But disadvantage is It is not healthy. So we better not to eat.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Belle. You can write simple words and short sentences, and your ideas are clear, even when there are mistakes. Keep learning how to use basic grammar, spelling, and punctuation. I appreciate the effort you show in completing writing tasks. Keep it up! ~Teacher Jane ^__^
The advantage is My feeling so better.
>> The advantage is that I feel better after eating fast food.
But disadvantage is It is not healthy.
>> But the disadvantage is it\'s unhealthy.
So we better not to eat.
>> So we had better not eat fast food.
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