Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Cathy.
Happy Monday, I took a rest during weekend, Now I\'m feeling good.
In Korea, high school students are not formally educated in finance. There are high schools that teach accounting, but it is only at a basic level.
As you know my major is Accouting where I learned universty.
In high school, students should experience many different fields rather than specialize in one. That helps students choose their future.
Sometimes, specialized subjects are not interesting, boring, and cause students to lose interest.
강사 첨삭
Hi Clark,
Your thoughts about education are very strong and clear. I really like how you explained that students should experience many fields before choosing a path. That shows wisdom, especially coming from someone who studied accounting and understands how specialized subjects can feel heavy or boring too early.
You expressed this in a thoughtful and logical way. You’re not just practicing English, you’re sharing real ideas based on life experience, and that’s exactly how language becomes powerful.
Thank you, as always, for doing your homework so sincerely. Your consistency and effort truly show.
~Teacher Cathy
Happy Monday, I took a rest during weekend, Now I\'m feeling good.
>>Happy Monday, I took a rest during the weekend. Now I\'m feeling good.
In Korea, high school students are not formally educated in finance. There are high schools that teach accounting, but it is only at a basic level.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In Korea, high school students do not receive formal financial education. Although some high schools offer accounting courses, they are limited to a basic level.
As you know my major is Accouting where I learned universty.
>>As you know, my major is accounting, which I learned at university.
In high school, students should experience many different fields rather than specialize in one. That helps students choose their future.
>>CORRECT
OR>>In high school, students should explore many different fields instead of specializing in just one, because this helps them decide on their future.
Sometimes, specialized subjects are not interesting, boring, and cause students to lose interest.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Sometimes, specialized subjects are uninteresting and can make students lose motivation.
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