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2026-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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How are birthdays typically celebrated in your family or culture, from when you were young and now that you are an adult? How have your feelings about birthdays [이름]ed as you’ve gotten older? I always ate cake my birthday since I was young. and I get a gift. or I get money. so I like it my birthday. when I was young, I get a toy. so I usually waiting my birthday. now I\'m not impressed my birthday. I don\'t know. I don\'t think much about my birthday. because I became father. I take care my son. I take my son birthday.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

-Teacher Ash

I always ate cake my birthday since I was young.

>> I always eat cake on my birthday ever since I was young.

and I get a gift. or I get money.

>> I also get presents or money on that day.

so I like it my birthday.

>> I like celebrating my birthdays when I was young.

when I was young, I get a toy. so I usually waiting my birthday.

>> I always get a toy so, I am always looking forward to celebrating my birthday.

now I\'m not impressed my birthday.

>> Now that I am an adult, I no longer look forward to it.

I don\'t know.

>> CORRECT!

I don\'t think much about my birthday.

>>CORRECT!

because I became father. I take care my son.

>> It is maybe because I am now a father and I have to look after my son.

I take my son birthday.

>> I look forward to celebrating my son\'s birthday though.

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