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Is there a kind of dessert that you will never eat?
To be honest, I don\'t like dessert.
Because, It is too sweet and too havey calories.
Sometimes when I drink a cup of coffee I some eat dessert.
One of the dessert I never eat kind of choorate syrup.
I prefer no-sweet dessert.
Thank you. ^^
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Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. ^^ [ You\'re welcome Sir [이름], have a great evening! ^^ ~ T. Camille ]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
Is there a kind of dessert that you will never eat?
To be honest, I don\'t like dessert.
To be honest, I don\'t like dessert.
>> To be honest, I don\'t like desserts.
OR >> To be honest, I don\'t enjoy eating desserts.
Because, It is too sweet and too havey calories.
>> Because, it is too sweet and contains many calories.
Sometimes when I drink a cup of coffee I some eat dessert.
>> Sometimes, when I drink a cup of coffee, I eat a dessert.
OR >> I sometimes eat a dessert to pair it with my cup of coffee.
One of the dessert I never eat kind of choorate syrup.
>> One of the desserts that I never eat is anything that has a chocolate syrup.
I prefer no-sweet dessert.
>> I prefer less sweet desserts.
Thank you. ^^ [ You\'re welcome Sir [이름], have a great evening! ^^ ~ T. Camille ]
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