Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What city in your country would you like to visit next time?
Um.. I want to go to Jeju Island.
Because This city is very beautiful in Korea.
Although, everything is too expensive.
But, I want to go hiking Halla mountain in Jeju Island.
One of the famous mountain there in the winter.
I haven\'t been go there before.
Thank you. T. Camille.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Sir [이름]!
Thank you. T. Camille. [ You\'re welcome Sir [이름], have a great evening! ^^ ~ T. Camille ]
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
What city in your country would you like to visit next time?
Um.. I want to go to Jeju Island.
Um.. I want to go to Jeju Island.
>> CORRECT!
Because This city is very beautiful in Korea.
>> It\'s because this city is a very beautiful city in Korea.
OR >> It\'s because this city is a very beautiful city in my country.
Although, everything is too expensive.
>> CORRECT!
But, I want to go hiking Halla mountain in Jeju Island.
>> But, I want to go hiking in Halla Mountain in Jeju Island.
One of the famous mountain there in the winter.
>> It\'s one of the famous mountains there in winter.
I haven\'t been go there before.
>> I haven\'t been there before.
Thank you. T. Camille. [ You\'re welcome Sir [이름], have a great evening! ^^ ~ T. Camille ]
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