Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My old uniform there is a short skirt and on the skirt there is a strite the top its long and the slevs are long to there is a school logo and there is a nocktie
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Great job describing your uniform! Next time, try adding colors or patterns to make the description even more vivid. For example: “My old uniform has a short blue skirt with a white stripe, and the top is white with long sleeves.” This will make your writing more detailed and easier for the reader to picture.
Please review the corrections. Remember that clear sentence structure and correct word choice make your ideas easier to follow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. My old uniform there is a short skirt and on the skirt there is a strite the top its long and the slevs are long to there is a school logo and there is a nocktie
-- My old uniform has a short skirt, and on the skirt there is a stripe. The top is long, and the sleeves are long too. It has a school logo and a necktie.
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