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Do you think eating out is healthy or unhealthy? Why?
I think eating out is unhealth.
When we eat go out, we want to eat delicious food. But almost delicious foods are bad to health. There have so many suger and fat. Not only that times we eat more than usally.
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I think eating out is unhealth.
When we eat go out, we want to eat delicious food.
>> I think eating out is unhealthy.
When we eat go out, we want to eat delicious food.
>> When we eat out, we usually want to eat delicious food.
But almost delicious foods are bad to health.
>> But most delicious foods are bad for your health.
There have so many suger and fat.
>> They contain a lot of sugar and fat.
Not only that times we eat more than usally.
>> Not only that, we also tend to eat more than usual.
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