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What are the character traits you are looking for in an IT helpdesk staff?
What types of issues does you expect to handle most often on a help desk?
I think helpdesk staff need to have gentle, a sense of responsibility and observation.
I want younger than me. so I required work.
IT helpdesk work most of supporting worker PC. He repair PC and resolve problem PC.
but That\'s very important, too. I think so.
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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
-Teacher Ash
>> I think a helpdesk staff needs to be gentle, responsible and observant.
I want younger than me. so I required work.
>> I want someone younger than me so, I can easily ask help from them.
IT helpdesk work most of supporting worker PC.
>> IT helpdesk mostly provides support in fixing computer issues.
He repair PC and resolve problem PC.
>> He repairs and fix computer problems.
but That\'s very important, too. I think so.
>> I think that is also very important job in the company.
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