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If it is their first time in another country, there are many risks in expanding their market. They should be well versed in local practices, culture, and the local economy. Even if they are well versed in the country where they want to enter, it does not guarantee success. Because of these factors, they may hesitate to enter another country.
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Ho [이름]!
Thank you for offering your viewpoint, and I agree with you that expanding a market to a foreign market may be risky. I heard from other people that they stayed in that country for quite some time, familiarize their cultures and laws, and decided to establish a business. Of course, not all experiences can apply to everyone, but there will always be a risk.
Aki~
If it is their first time in another country, there are many risks in expanding their market.
>>> CORRECT!
They should be well-versed in local practices, culture, and the local economy.
>>> CORRECT!
Even if they are well-versed in the country where they want to enter, it does not guarantee success.
>>> CORRECT!
Because of these factors, they may hesitate to enter another country.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Due to these factors, they are hesitant to navigate to another country.
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